Read the following excerpt from a student essay. How can the writer best improve their word choice?

If I could invent something, I would create a really nice bicycle. My bike would have a good seat and great tyres so that I could ride it anywhere. It would also have a bell and special pockets for carrying things. A special top would be wonderful, so I could ride it in the rain but also enjoy the sun. I would choose a fun colour to reflect my personality. Inventing a new bike would be cool.

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#1. Read the following excerpt from a student essay. How can the writer best improve their word choice?

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